Monday, October 24, 2011

war.

Gunshots echo through his hollow heart as he feels nothing but the vibrations through his ears.  Sudden movements cause him no fear for anyone, including himself.  He wonders why he is even fighting.  Perhaps he still, somewhere enclosed in his emptiness, has hope. Perhaps he doesn't know what to do anymore. The smoke continues to spread through the open field while the ground is littered with cold, lifeless bodies. He feels a mixture of pity and jealousy as he sees the light leave the eyes of a man, knowing somewhere, someone would soon weep.

4 comments:

Lorraine said...

hey, I just wanted to leave you a comment. I saw your blog on the Owl City blog. (: I'm a big fan of Owl City, so I had to check this out. (: You are a great writer!

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Unknown said...

Hey! This is really good. I kind of ABSOLUTELY FREAKING LOVE your blog! LOL Don't stop!!!! I hope Adam finds you!

...kate... said...

Saw your blog on your comment on Adam's newest post.. I love it;)